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I was going through the email list to send a specific email to the people in the Egger's group, but I couldn't match the person with certain email addresses. So, I'll just post my questions and comments here, since we all decided to each write in our blog about the collaboration poem for Thursday.
I was curious, did we want to have our shrinklet rhyme? Follow a certain meter? Or just blank verse or even free verse?
Feedback to the questions above would help in terms of what we all want our verse to be like.
My couplet would probably change accordingly, but here's what I have (so far) for my part (Chapter 1 and 2):
-Introduce Odysseus and his hardship
-Athena inspires the Prince to set sail for news of Odysseus
EDITED --
A.
Sing a short one, Muse, of the luckless hero whose travels have grown weary.
His son sets sail with hopes to find news of his father that's merry. (? hahaha. :9) Okay. Okay. No rhyming?
B.
Sing a short one, Muse, of the luckless hero whose travels have grown weary.
With a seed of hope, his son sets sail for news of his father's well-being.
On another note, seeing how our deadline for our first expressive paper was moved to Thursday, I decided I would just post my final draft (after I make more revisions from the paper I had today).
Posted by Aesun Kim on 4/27/04; 7:28:58 PM
from the dept.
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